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Ashrae~Fighter Michiko wasn't the only one who didn't feel comfortable about the carriage, only, unlike her, I was hesitant because I didn't trust the horses. For some reason, I didn't ...

Um...Mazzi? Unless you made plans with PhoenixBishop, you probably shouldn't have written that much about Camden, it's kinda God-modding. I'm just saying that, BigBads are suppose to be bad and ...

I loved it, as usual. But this time I had a couple nitpics. (My additions in purple) I didn't say anything, but Caitlin didn't seem to expect me too to ...

I love your stories! I secretly followed your last book, the Fire on Water, last year before I joined. And once again you've impresses me. I love your style, description, ...

>When you say "flinging out my powers to trap her" do you mean a wall of water, or just a powerful net?< Tristen~Satyr I rushed up to the Dryad after ...

So, do the BigBads work for the queen?

Name: Raymi Age: 16 Gender(all male): Uh... the parentheses said it all. Quote: Who needs bronze when you've got brains? Themes Song: Scream, Zac Efron (I know it isn't the ...

Please forgive me for saying this, but I think it sucked, as I do the other books. Just some reasons: 1. The characters are way to powerful. They're all mary-sue ...

Yes! First comment! Woohoo! *coughs* um, sorry. We have this thing here on YWS where we all compete against being the first. Anyways, so, I see you're new here, hi! ...

I'll have a fighter. Name: Ashrae (or Ash) Age: 23 Gender: Female Appearance: Fly-away, dark auburn hair and yellow/brown eyes. Slim body type, but tall at 5'7''. She likes to ...

Wow, I agree *stares off into space dreamily*

Wow, these are really great. I love how you put the dolls in life-like positions. I think my fave will have to be the second one of Tomoyo's dark side.

This is amazing, Apple, I didn't know you were such a talented writer! I loved it! Your discription was really good. And it kept me curious, which is good. Gosh, ...

Ok guys, I have some bad news. I'm not going to see you for awhile because I've decided to take a break from the computer. I have a really bad ...

Ok guys, I have some bad news. I'm not going to see you for awhile because I've decided to take a break from the computer. I have a really bad ...