DragonWriter

I absolutly love the idea. I mean this is a diamond, in raw form of corse. However I beleive if you do some major polishing, editing,and tweaking, you will have ...

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You need to do some major editing, but the gist of it was great. Add a few more deatails, less repeating, some more dialouge,and you will have the best storry ...

The idea is still great, however you still did not edit it before you post. Get a friend or family member to read over it, without you interupting them, so ...

I like it, and i love it. You know how bad I am at spelling so i cannot comment on that, but the rest was great. I absolutly loved the ...

divorce sucks, yes it does. parrents seperating, making you be constantly on the move, i wishe there was somthingi could do, it is all my fault. I want to run ...

This is a great idea. I absolutly love the plot, and the characters. However this story could do with some magor editing and twiking here and there. THere are a ...

I absolutly love this storry. It is absolutly wonderfull. Full action, and just the right amount of confusion , and detials. I like how you are introducing chracters with the ...

Rules: one chracter profiles in red coments in green plot: A boy's grandfather has just died He is helping his mom clean out hgis grandfather's house. he finds the key. ...

it is good, but you know you can do better. editt and edit, and it will get better.

I loke it, Bit i could love it. YOu need to add alot more detail. What were the boys playing. Why did the pepol loath the eyes. What war. a ...

no fare , no fare. I absolutly refuse to think that admanda is dead. why did yhis happen in the first chappter. I hate you keeping the darn supppence. You ...

Catalina called her geurd together. "i need two voluteers to go in and poision the water supply. Another voluteer will tell the prisioners not to drink the water. And that ...

catalina had been scouting ahead for the pack, as an egle which was worshiped by the nearest village. Suddenly, she saw a glint of somthing shiny. She swooped doewn for ...