DragonWriter

I like it, I love, I cannot wait to read more of it. Once again james cusses the sky blue, but it has an actule chartming qulity for him. Also, ...

“Come on, we are going to be late for class if we do not hurry up” shouted Brad, as we searched for my lucky quarter which had just fallen out ...

Man, You need to contact an producer pronto, I think this would be set up into a show. It is Good! I liked how lina was a bitch, james a ...

But if you knew the love of your life was about to kill himself, would you not stop everything and try and stop? put yourself in bella's position. also, think ...

I am confused. But in a nice way. I do not understna dit, but somehow i get what you are trying to say. It is one of those relly fun ...

Wow! Great! Fantastic! Awesome! I love it! Abosolutly positivly love it. However I feel that you are telling, not showing. Also get a stranger to read it outloud. This will ...

Great! Aboslutely wonderful! Umm, but somethings wrong! It is not finshed. So put on your thinking cap and get writting. lol, sorry about that, had to get it off my ...

God

like it, love it, want to marry the story, joking! but it is that good! laugh out loud, you probly think i am freak, but your stories, like, umm, rule!

Love it, love it. It was ecellent. Man, it was awesome. I cannot say enything, i am speechless. No idea on how to improve it. i change my last reveiw, ...

Wow! I love it. However, I feeli like I need more info of the chracters. Give us maybe mnore back ground info. Or Maybee you could just describe the setting ...

good points! The idea, so far, is unique and interesting. Your sentece structures are nice and the story flows smoothly. not so good points it was short. sugeatrions you need ...

good points! The idea, so far, is unique and interesting. Your sentece structures are nice and the story flows smoothly. not so good points it was short. sugeatrions you need ...

Ok, so I like your idea. However, you material could do with some tweaking hear or there. I agree with everyones comments. Except, we could do with some serious back ...

it was a bit confusing. more later bye] \