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Re: Paracelsus - Prologue
I am speechless. That is a defeat no one has ever suceded in. Usually i am so full of words. Noww, I can only think of two words. WOW and ...
Jun 8, 2007 -
Re: The Black Bandit
I absolutely love this story. YOu have plenty of deatils, just enough dialaect and well i am in love with this story. THis story makes you feel the aggravation of ...
Jun 8, 2007 -
Re: The Dragon Knight Legacy Prologue (Remake)
I love it. It is a well thought out story, as far as I can tell. If it does get published, which i sure it will, I will buy it. ...
Jun 8, 2007 -
Re: Life Expectancy #1
I like it, I hope to read some more of it. I wish there was more details. THere is so much dialogue it it shadows details. A story shpuld have ...
Jun 8, 2007 -
Re: Nestling prologue...wanna read?
I like it, i agree it was some confusing. I think it was a dragon, though. It has pleanty of destil though , no need for more.
Jun 8, 2007 -
Re: MoonMagic..Chap.1
A silver haired elf, tall and graceful, was running through the swaying grass. "Moon Streak" Alberic, the elf, called to his beloved horse. The gray Mare came trotting over to ...
Jun 8, 2007 -
Re: chapter 1 to my book {still a draft}
I doint see that meany gramatical errors, compared to mine, it is perfact, But, well, I like the biggining, however, why can simon not have the feeling that evan though ...
Jun 8, 2007 -
Re: Mythical Creatures of Sada
Name: Shadow Race:WereCat Gender:Female Age:14 Abilities:Can change into enything living. A human shape can only last 5 hours. Animal shape indefinate. Maythical creature shape last 24 hours!Can do il
Jun 7, 2007 -
Re: Rebecca
It is pretty good, however it sounds like a girl in blue. WHich is about a girl who sneaks off to the war , trying to escsape a marrige. Then ...
Jun 6, 2007 -
Re: The Dragon
Posted: Sat May 12, 2007 3:04 am Post subject: The dragon -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- chapter one The finding Simon was lowering himself, down in a
Jun 6, 2007 -
Re: The Leaf of Fire (Chapter One)
I abbsolutly love it. The only problem i have is that you did not deiscibe his mount good enough. Brown mare. Bahh borringg. You will no way get horse lovers ...
Jun 5, 2007 -
Re: Mystery on the Nile
i have read tons of books. I have little writting experience though. It sound a liltle like merry kate and ashly mixed with scobby dooby doo. Umm, I thonk the ...
Jun 5, 2007 -
Re: Character development
Before you write your story you should always write a charater qeustinare. just follow this formant. name: age: birth place: personality: pet peeves: fears: weaknesses: familly: job: edgucation: and a
Apr 21, 2007 -
Re: Death
Death What is death, but leaving this world and entering another. confronting god, him chosing your fate, hell or heven What is death, if god is in your heart, but ...
Apr 18, 2007 -
Re: amber
Hi, My name is amber. I am a 13-year-old girl who is trying to fight her way into the writting professian. So far I have writen no books, but i ...
Apr 17, 2007
