DragonWriter

I totally agree with snoik. If you keep editing and revising, the better it will get, the netter it get the more competition follows, which means every one will be ...

Alberic woke with a start. He had just had a horrible dream. He shuddered just remembering it. He had been trotting with Moon Streak on field. He had been leading ...

Catalina wakes up from her nap on nicraguas neck. She notices the new comeres and so turns into her cat. "Welcome and what bring yall to this neck of the ...

goes back to the river, and dips the hair 5 times, then she took her stone and bit it in half in her mouth, by the time she took them ...

Cattalina woke up slowly trying to get her bearings. She was in a clearing with leothero watching her. SHe realized she was starving and had not eten sine who nknows ...

Name=dw age=15 race=human occupation=rebbelios noble daughter reason on the street= ran away from home because her dad was treating the peasants porely Decriptian= a blond head tall girl. Has shaven ...

Cattalina wake up and realizes that know body is in the clearing. She needed her stone and bad. She had maybe 1/10 of the life force she needed to be ...

Cattalina secreatly aggreed with nicuargua. She turned back into her cat shape. I have bigger poblems, though she thought . she was hungry and she was extreamely tired because human ...

I can not please everyone pepol, first i do include everything in the story, then i take it out, now a person wants me to puit it back. first i ...

Dw started to change into a differnt shape every minnute trying to think of one which the spider could not. her tries included a two headed, crab, a griffon, a ...

Ok, i am sorry to say that you could do much better if you tried, and you know you can do better from what you post in the storry book. ...

Cattlina herd the comotion and hurridly changes into her human form. She looked about ten, with a puple tunic brown leggings and about 20 flat but deadly daggers hidden about ...

Cattalina starts to ponder this last thought. She walks over to leothoro . "We need to talk and now. Everyone is so untrustful of me. I want to show you ...

I like it, however you can improve it. Eddit, eddit, revise, and eddit some more. Then after that you eddit, revise and eddit the storry again. That is why this ...

I like it. I love it, but i do not want more of it.