DragonGirl11

Banned because I'm on summer vacation and don't want to think about school.

Banned for hating on haters.

DragonGirl11 here, hoping to help you become a better writer. This story is a really good idea. The princess betrayed by her love: classic. The first few paragraphs really grabbed ...

Breakfast sandwiches.

Banned for loving the moon :)

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banned for having a picture of a man as your avatar.

The frolicking pony is very pretentious so he always skipped around trees. When suddenly groundhogs attacked nearby settlers who were smoking some turkeys. Howling winds blasted rifles, the men graspe

somebody that died because they ate too much McDonalds.

This is a story I wrote for an English assignment back in June. We were supposed to write a story with a lesson. I think this falls under "action" but ...

Banned for having ten of the 27 - wait, now it's 28 - posts in this tread.

What I really noticed about this poem was the way the lines were so short. There are several places where you might want to consider rearranging line breaks, for example, ...

Awwe :)

Banned for using four exclamation marks at the end of YOUR sentence.

Hello, I'm DragonGirl11, and I'll be reviewing Trickster's Almonds today. I know it's older, but no reviews? Really? Starting from the beginning: the description of drowning was a little unconventiona