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Re: In The Shadows
I love this, its hauntingly beautiful and caught me up in it easily. It engaged my emotions and didn't let go until the end. It flowed flawlessly (to me anyways) ...
Jan 17, 2011 -
Re: [Sacred Blood Bk;1] Midnight Blood-Chapter One; Winters Past
A/N; There is a Prologue that comes before this that can be read here - One – Winters Past Twin full moons shone down brightly on the palace. In the ...
Jan 17, 2011 -
Re: Bathing in the Candle Light.
I liked the idea of what you’re trying to convey. Honestly it was good but the way it flowed was very awkward and disjointed. It looked (and sounded) like you'd ...
Jan 17, 2011 -
Re: Remember me
Very simple and bittersweet, not the worst imagery in the world but some things seemed to contradict each other - "I try to stand but I must fight today"-. Other ...
Jan 17, 2011 -
Re: Name finding tips
While it's generally concidered a boys name i've always seen the name Logan as a very good name for a tom-boyish girl. I also recommend something like Darby or Rory, ...
Jan 17, 2011 -
Re: Face the Facts
Nicely written :). I love the way you compared the two men, very realistic and thought provoking. It really made me think back to how I’ve acted to others and ...
Jan 17, 2011 -
Re: Broken glass.
Really beautiful, I loved the mood of it and other than a few areas it flowed really nicely. The imagry your words provocted in my mind were beautiful as well. ...
Jan 17, 2011 -
Re: [Sacred Blood Bk;1] Midnight Blood
The core part I am getting is that there is magick in your world, and that that the magick in your world is abused by some people for evil purposes. ...
Jan 17, 2011 -
Re: [Sacred Blood Bk;1] Midnight Blood
Prologue - Forbidden Magick Voices rang out loud, echoing in the underground cavern, chanting, ancient words that flowed effortlessly, vowels and consonants wrapping around each other. Their beat was
Jan 7, 2011