DrElefant

With her a thousand dancing daffodils Swaying winter, waltzing welcome the spring And summer sunsets scribed from solstice quills Whilst sunrise symphonies she softly sing For she is my season ...

Okay, so it was good of you to inform us that you're thinking of entering this piece in a contest. That said, I shall be as honest as I can ...

Wherefore shall I write, whence only for thee – She, inspiration of inspirations Lest for thee, wherefore thine loving breath be – She, Cupid’s victorious coronation Thine words be fickle, ...

Your piece seems to exhibit a poesy rather rare for writers our age (I'm 16 too). I find it emotionally arousing, as this is a good example of words being ...

The idea of contradicting lines is artistically sound, the poem itself is fundamentally proper. Kudos for using the poetic silences to insert the "This is humanity" succession. However, the lack ...

Hath did thy stars conspire for thee To lend of love from love’s own usury And hath thou art of love’s self-same eye Of thou love be thy heart to ...