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Re: Nephilim
I just loved loved loved loved this work ! It was fantastically amazing ! ;) I love the metaphors you used in the poem..the way the mystery slowly unravels that ...
Apr 16, 2011 -
Re: Angel burned by Bibles
Wow this was.....amaziing like really omg....Like i could reeeaaaallllyy feel the emotions in this poem, the way you were feeling at the time you wrote this. I'm sorry....Your work just ...
Apr 16, 2011 -
Re: YOU
Wow. This was an awsome piece girl ! Im impressed ! I, it's like you were talking to me...:/ It really shows the conflicting emotions within you. But please don't ...
Apr 16, 2011 -
Re: A Teenager's Meaning of Life
So i liked this piece. It is quite true...soo true actually. :)
Apr 13, 2011 -
Re: Hospital Calamities
Haha this was funny to me. I like the way you made the poem matter-of-factly; though it could have had more emotions in it. -__- Also, i liked the title. ...
Apr 13, 2011 -
Re: The Objective of The Game
Wow. So first of all, i loved the title of the story...and the way you started it. It kept me reading till the end...honestly i was sad when it endend ...
Apr 13, 2011 -
Re: Blinded by Sight
Well...this poem doesn't really say EXACTLY what is making the narrator like he is. I mean i expected a turning point , an explanation at the end that would explain ...
Apr 13, 2011 -
Re: The Letters: Chapter One
wow omggg!! This was soo sad!! :( But still sooo well written ! And it kept me interested and anticipating till the end ! :) I just loved it ! ...
Apr 12, 2011 -
Re: Two-Faced
When i read this, it made me think of myself...what i've been through makes me write such things myself. Your poem was a little confusing as there were small gramatical ...
Apr 12, 2011 -
Re: In just a few years
Haa I this poem. First i would like to say that if you had put it in stanzas, it would appear reeally better. If not, i loved the thoughts that ...
Apr 12, 2011 -
Re: Once my only love but now, my passionate hate.
heyy girrl i actually liked this poem. If you think it bad then those other stories of yours must be awesome! :) I know what you mean....well don't force yourself. ...
Apr 12, 2011 -
Re: My Aborted Child
Wow...this was just amazing ! I could feel the girl's pain. Everything she went through. I loved the way you let the reader feel the emotion of the characters in ...
Apr 12, 2011 -
Re: First Date
Hahha this storyh was cute and funny ! :) I especially loved the way you made the narrator narrate. Funny and full of witty humour ehh?! ;) Awesome. =))
Apr 12, 2011 -
Re: 'Til Death Do Us Part
Like i said before...amazing story -__- You got tooooooooooo much talent girl ! Please dont get lazy of writing this...its awesome! :D I wanna read more!! :) Oh and i ...
Apr 12, 2011 -
Re: 'Til Death Do Us Part
Yeah i hae same question :P I was expecting some kind of drama from the parents? if not.....your story is just awesome..toooo incredible for words man !:D
Apr 12, 2011