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Ahem...Well it was a good chapter (as usual) -__- Well i would like to say...(you might not agree here)...But dont you think that the "baby"s are a little tooo much? ...

This was a good read. Loved it. It was sad too, in just a good way. But just a little bit cliche though. Keep it up! :)

Do you ever feel left out? Like you just don’t belong? You ever wanna shout? Just tell the world that they’re wrong? You ever felt like telling ‘em all Who ...

Yep...I liked this poem...liked it alot ! I also liked the repetition at the beginning of each stanza. Keep it up, it was a lovely read. And yeah...i also feel ...

OH OH OH !!!!! :O B-E-A-U-T-I-F-U-L POEM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! omggg amaziing man!! I loved it ! loved it toooo much even ! :) Loved the rhymes. Loved the way everything makes sense. ...

So this is where I say enough This is where I pluck up the courage This is the time when I become tough Or at least I appear to be ...

When you were far away I wanted you close I wanted you to forever stay 'Cause you were my love dose Every night when I closed my eyes I would ...

Yep. nice poem. So much like mee ! :o..;)

Haaaa omg that sounds soooo much like me ! O.o haha loved it ! :)

Wow. I liked this poem alot. It really showed the pain you felt. Sorry :/ Very nice. Keep it up ! :)

Yep. I would be lying if i told you i didnt like this poem...i LOVED IT ! :) Keep it up :)

This was a nice poem. I think it would have been better with more emotions but i guess that's how you were feeling when you wrote this :/ Anyways i ...

Haha! This poem made me smile =) Love the way the quotes you used fitted together well. Nice keep it up :)

Wellf 0well happy you continued ally :) you ARE a tireless writer!^^ So yahh as u know i liked the story =) But well I think it would be better ...

I liked this story! Beautiful ! :) I loved the plot and all. Please keep it up girrl ! =D I would really really have liked it to continue though ...