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Re: Scars: Part 4
Ohh This is tooooooo good! I love the turning point in the story too! Wasnt expecting that. Yep i like surprises u_u Keep rocking this story will ya? ;3 OH ...
Jul 23, 2011 -
Re: Scars: Part 3
Ayy Once again: awesome! Maan im addicted to this storry! I love the suspense here ;) Its reeally emotional! I just loved it! Oh yeah and its actually funny!! Haha ...
Jul 23, 2011 -
Re: Scars: Part 2
YEpp this was just as awesome as the first chapter! Very entertaining! :) But i must admit.....I got a little confused when you were talking about those girls who broke ...
Jul 23, 2011 -
Re: Scars: Part 1
Wow! I really loved this story! :) It really is emotional and the narrator actually opens up from the first. However, i think that you could have been a little ...
Jul 23, 2011 -
Re: 'Til Death Do Us Part
Like x 1000 !!!! :D usual ehh! :) Cant wait for chapter 12! :) Ayyy ally ! Cutting the chapter just when it was about to get juicy...hmpphh xD
Jul 16, 2011 -
Re: The Sun Shall Shine Through
I'm sorry dear little lamb For what you're going through For the way you're forced to cram All those devastating feelings in you I'm sorry for the pain you feel ...
Jun 14, 2011 -
Re: Call This Hell
I was on the run. I had to escape where I lived before those bandits found me and made me fit for a cemetery! All I could think of was ...
Jun 14, 2011 -
Re: Ephemeral And Hard Working - That's Me!
I scrawled around aimlessly. I saw the others doing the same, hunting for food and talking between themselves. However, I was never part of their group as I was a ...
Jun 14, 2011 -
Re: Booty Shorts
Hahaha I loved the rhymes and rythm of this poem. Plus, it was humourous too! Awesome, keep up the good work! =)
Jun 14, 2011 -
Re: Always and forever
Haa i loved this poem. I liked the way every verse starts the same way and yeah the messgae of your poem. Lovely
Jun 13, 2011 -
Re: The Exploitation Of Young Children
Introduction: Marie-Christine: Good morning everyone. Today, the assembly of the Amnesty members in Year 8 & 9, is about ‘vidomingon’in fon, meaning: Children who live with peope other than their ...
Jun 13, 2011 -
Re: How could you?
Awsomeness! I loved the way i felt and could relate to the writer's pain. Keep it up! Not much ot review since you're so good! =.=
Jun 13, 2011 -
Re: 'Til Death Do Us Part
Awesome...very realistic too! I now understood chapter 9 -__-
Jun 13, 2011 -
Re: 'Til Death Do Us Part
I must admit something...I am TOTALLY confused here! Is it a really a joke or are they indirectly talking about what happened with jess?? Honestly i kinda got lost here! ...
Jun 13, 2011 -
Re: 'Til death do us part
Hehe i loved the turning point of this story! Can't wait to read the rest! :D
Jun 13, 2011