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whoaah!!!! this was awesomely GOOD ! haha i loved it! Especially the way you gave an image of how a rollercoaster runs but in hell, sort of. Lets just say ...

Ok so i really liked this poem! short, kind of melodramatic and emotional! Lovely! :) but i must say that it was a little "cliché"... Maybe you should try adding ...

i loved this one too!! You gonna continue it?

OMG THIS Ws AWEEEEESOOOMEEE!!!!! LIKE I GOT HOOKEDD ON IT FROM GHE VERY FFIRST PHRASE! :D Im afraid i aint got no nitpiicks for ya! xD CANT WAIT TO READ ...

Aaaah ! nice i liked it! :) but i must admit that i was quite hoping for a happy ending u_u I mean did she really have to leave? -_-

ooouh ! i lloved it !! i also likeed the suspense here! way to go! keep up the good work im affraid i don't have any corrections to make u_u

Awesooooooommmme!!! I loved this story! It was really touching. I liked the fact that it started with the present, went back in time and then came back to the present! ...

I like like like!!!!! Haa nice poem you got there! :) Very well written, im afraid i dont have anything bad to say xD I liked the way the poem ...

Awesome! Wow this Tomas seems to be going through alot of deceptions lately! T_T Ayy! ANd funny too ofcourse ;) Also, you made another tiny mistake :p Its "waved" not ...

Haha this was AWESOME ! :D I loved it! Really funny and i liked the way you were so matter-factly with everything. Also i was very detailed which is something ...

What would you call it? Impossible love? Having you so close And still so far beneath my reach? I knew it was a dream A mere fairytale But still it ...

Whooooa i absolutely loved this one! Haa i just love the emotions that you poured into this poem! SO maany people can realte to it! Just...wonderful! :) ANd once again, ...

I liked this poem. Sounds like something i would write. :) I also loved the rhymes you had in it but the rythm was a little off beat. Maybe you ...

CANT WAIT OFR CHAPTER 7 !!!! Im just hooked on this story! Haha! Im looving the suspense here! I wonder what's going to happen next .... u_u

Omg OMg Omg !!This is just as awesome as the previous ones!!!!!!!!!! ANd the end was sooo sad! Like i actually cried! o.o Haha wow you have a talent ! ...