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Whoooaaah!! Incredibly A.W.E.S.O.M.E. !!!! :D Really, it was very interesting and i couldtn get my eyes off till i finished reading it! =.= You think you could kinda do a ...

Wow!! I was hooked from the start! :D Awesome debut! Cant waiit to read the rest!! Really awesome! Im afraid i have no corrections to make xD Keep up the ...

Wow!! I was hooked from the start! :D Awesome debut! Cant waiit to read the rest!! Really awesome! Im afraid i have no corrections to make xD Keep up the ...

I kinda liked this story! :) I was hooked from the first line i must say =.= Keep up the good work! :) I liked the way you changed from ...

SO i really really liked this poem! I liked the message you're sending, the way its written. Good good! :) Looks really true to mee! Keep up the good work! ...

Well where do i start? .... Awesomely good !! I loved it! :D I loved the way i could feel the paiin and all. BUt i must admit that a ...

I really liked this poem! And i can imagine the pain just from reading it! Very emotional and truue! Keep it up! :)

AWESOOOME!!! :D Whoa i really loved the way you poured alot of emotion in the story. ANd i loved, loved the metaphorical phrases! :D Keep up the good work will ...

Hahaha I found the last part hilarious! :D Man do i know how that feels! -__- But why was it so short?? I didnt quite get the goal you were ...

Wow! Awesome story! I got hooked on it from the first line! :) I really loved it! Sadly, i have no reproaches to make u_u Keep up the good work!! ...

Well this peom was nice! I liked the way your emotions flowed! :) And yes i think you coudl use a little less the word "would" and replace it with ...

Wow! This was a very touching story!! :) Really loved it! But i didnt get the end. Like i think it was a little confusing; like how he was suddenly ...

I've got SWAG, and that's a fact People love me, just for that Everything I do makes you stare Well go on looking, cause I dont care Your poor tortured ...

This was for the contest: If It Was A Story...But I unfortunately couldn't finish it in time. Either way, I would very much like reviews!!! :D " I never want ...

This was for the contest: If It Was A Story...But I unfortunately couldn't finish it in time. Either way, I would very much like reviews!!! :D " I never want ...