Doxie00

Oh My Gee-Ow-Dee !!! That story is just amazing and fantastic ! I loved the plot...everything. But i admit i kinda got confused somewhere. Like, when the narrator does a ...

OMG!!!!!!!! when i read this poem, i thought i was looking at a portrait of my self, my own life. Girl do i feel you ! I know what you're ...

Ahh Okaayyy.....What, you guys think it's like TOO morbid and um sad and all? Cause hum, if that's the case i would like to tell you that well not all ...

So this is my life I'm about to tell you I'm gonna tell you all bout my strife Bout all what i wish i could do I'm turning fourteen soon ...

Wow. Omg. That, that was n amazing story. I could feel that little boy's pain. Is it a true story? Is it your true story? :/ If so...man i'm so ...

Oh my...here i love the details you put in it about the kiss for example and what the narrator was feeling. I can't wait for the third chapter!!! :D

Well...i dont quite agree with you when you said that : "Some say love is the sensing,kissing, lips pressed together,holding, arms wrapped tight,smelling, drifting, lingering odors,feeling, hearts pou

Oh Myy!!! Aly you are SO talented!! :O You should be a writer some day man :3 Your story sounds so real; you describe the narrator's emotions quite well...(though maybe ...

I loved you as you were Whole heartedly I always wanted you near Cause you were my one and only Everytime i saw you My heart would skip two beats ...

OMG !!! When i read your poem, i felt as if you were talking to me. I like the repetition. I love the way you did your stanzas, the way ...

So here i am With my body, my soul I'm mad at you God For who you made me be My physical appearance My loudness It's such a nuisance Yeah ...

Its a very good poem. I especially liked the rhyming words i must say :) But dont forget: (like you told me) be careful with your punctuation..."cover*s* is" its supposed ...

WOw ! Your poem is beautiful. When i read it, it seemed to be coming from the seemed so real (that it even made me think of myself -_- ) ...