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Haha :) I love this poem? I liked the ending, it made me smile :) Keep up the good work, i have nothing bad to say about it! :)

Wow. Amazing. I could feel the emotion, everything the girl was feeling. Most of all, i really can relate to this poem. It's just beautiful.

Wow ! Thsi was a really sad but beautiful poem. I really felt sad thanks to your ability to convey emotion to the reader ! :) But be careful with ...

Wow ! I loved this poem. I liked the description you put inside, how the soldeir feels. The guilt he has which is weighing him down. The way he knows ...

Nice..i love the rhymes :)

She couldn't help smiling to herself when she thought of what had just happened...She had been in school as usual and had gone through all the routines: The classes in ...

Heyy i loved this poem ! Especially the rhymes ! :) Looks like the kind of thing i do too :) And um i think it should be 'Just LET ...

Oh this is a nice poem. I liked the amount of emotion poured inside; I was able to feel the writer's pain and frustration. I especially liked this part: Tell ...

I like the way you went straight to the point when you started your story. I like the way the narrator's feelings can be imagined by a reader, the way ...

Haha noooooo it wasnt meant to be a song...just a poem :) I just fail in song writing -__- ..And thanks for the critics...i'll try to correct myself next time ...

As I watch you go My heart keeps screaming 'NO!' Though I surely do know That the only thing I was familiar with, Was hard love 24 hours a day ...

Niice ! :) I especially loved the rhymes :)

Oh a lovely poem ! :) I think it is just fine were you put it really :) Keep up the good work

I felt the waves As they rippled through my body As they made me shiver As they made tiny Goose bumps appear On my skin So i threw my head ...

Beautiful poem ! I love the tone...bland but still poignant ;) keep up the good work :)