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So I was in Hawaii for my holidays! Me Angela Riascos! I so couldn’t believe it. I had begged my parents so much for this (along with my little brother ...

Wow. Awesome poem. I loved the rhymes. Sometimes, I feel that way too. But just know that sooner or later things will shine for you :) No worries ;)

eautiful ! I like the way you held my attention from the beginning ! An interesting reading it was :)

Hey ! I love the rhymes adn the poem too :) Good work.

Wow. I jsut loved it ! It was a litte confusing at first thoug..try making your writing clearer next time and add more details to make it even more interesting ...

Nice ! Like the way everything was formulated. Keep it up !

Oh nice ! At first, I didn't see that it was an acrostic...until i wondered why you every letter starting a phrase was in italic -__-

Beautifully written. Though there was a part were I got confused. Try making your writing clearer. Btw, I loved seeing how mixed up the narrator was.

You all telling me I changed Well I say what-the-hell? Im tired of being ranged In your claustrophobic cell I am who I am Too bad you couldn't see that ...

Wow. So soryy for you :( Maybe she had a reason for what she's doing? :/ eitherway your poem really touched me. I loved the way i could feel your ...

Nice poem :) I love the rhymes...(i just have something with rhymes rly -__-) They're beautiful..and i admire to way you used them here. Remeber re-read what you write...you have ...

Beautiful, simply beautiful ! Love the emotions which seem to be tumbling out in a rush. Maybe you could have had some more paragraphs?...'Cause it's really nice ! :)

WOw ! o_o SOunds like some of the things i write -_- Just that yours is PERFECTO ! ;) You have talent man...wow. I like the way you could feel ...

Awesome poem. Really good, congrats ! :)

Befor I die I wanna fly across the sky Before I die I wanna experience true love with a guy I wanna go out there in the world Meet new ...