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Re: 'Til Death Do Us Part
wowwwww!!!!! this is...just amazing!!!!! :O omgggggg i looooooooooooooooooooooooooooovvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvvveeeeeeeeeeeeee iitttttt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! girrrrl PLEASE NEVER STOP WRITING !!! ;) u have T
Apr 12, 2011 -
Re: GoodBye
If we can’t get over this Then it’s not real friendship That means your words were bullshit Yeah all what came from your lip You piece of scumbag I can’t ...
Apr 12, 2011 -
Re: Love You, Hate You, Miss You
WOw ! 0_o i just loved that! Beautiful ! All those emotions are like sooo true..like they describe love really shows how mixed your emotions can be :) Incredible. Keep ...
Apr 12, 2011 -
Re: Lullaby
OH MY GEE-OWW-DEE ;) ...This poem touched the bottom of my heart!! Please don't make any unnecessary changes (especially with the rhymes 'cause they are perfect) :) Unfortunately i have ...
Apr 10, 2011 -
Re: Trust
Oh myy I'm soo sorry for youu. Believe me, i know what you're going through,,,going through the same thing right now myself...I hope you get better soon. All the best. ...
Apr 9, 2011 -
Re: BreAkinG heArT
Do you know what it feels like to have a breaking heart? Not caused by love, but by a friend Do you know how it feels To see that you ...
Apr 9, 2011 -
Re: Infinite Days
Wow this really touched me. I really liked this poem. I like the way the realisation of the narrator is described at the end. Keep it up. :)
Apr 9, 2011 -
Re: Nostalgia
Wow. Beautiful piece of art ! I especially loved the way you drew the hair of the boy; like you can see that he got a haircut; I love the ...
Apr 9, 2011 -
Re: Self Potrait :D
O.M.G.!!!!!! =O u r suuuch a goood artist man!!! Woowww puh-leeease KEEP IT WORK!! :) However, d piece looks a bit scare :p mostly coz of the eyes...can't wait to ...
Apr 9, 2011 -
Re: Fair-weather Friend
Oh ! What a poem ! At first, it was kind of confusing 'cause it started with two voices. SO to answer your question yes, I really think you should ...
Apr 9, 2011 -
Re: Fall to rise Again
Wow. That was a beautiful poem. I liked the metaphors you used to show how you must always have hope. It really touched my heart. Love it! Keep writing :)
Apr 9, 2011 -
Re: Do not click this.
Hahaha =D I like that poem ! We humans are sooo predictable ! xD
Apr 7, 2011 -
Re: I Thought I Could Trust You
I thought I could thrust you Ad went ahead and told you Some things you shouldn't have known, i guess But how could I know that you'd force me in ...
Apr 7, 2011 -
Re: Deadly Dream
I liked this poem. Really nice and I especially loved the rhymes girl!! :)...I also liked the way you describe how death will slowly creep in...love the title too :) ...
Apr 6, 2011 -
Re: Invisible
This is an awesome piece. I just loved it ! Really...amazing and creative. I liked the way you first introduce the girl and then how you are suddenly questioning the ...
Apr 6, 2011
