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Re: Just A Thought – To Show You Care
This is my slam about food and hunger Which causes such a great disaster So many children in the world are starving While in them rich countries, people on wasting ...
Jan 28, 2012 -
Re: Can’t Lie To Your Soul !
A smile here Even a funny joke A laugh there While inside I choke I may lie to you and you But at the end of the day No matter ...
Jan 28, 2012 -
Re: Forever- That’s When Eternity Starts
When I’m with you I never want to get away I wish the sky would always stay blue Prolonging this blissful day Having you here right now Next to me ...
Jan 28, 2012 -
Re: It Was My Mistake
It Was My Mistake They told me you were a fag That you really had no heart That to you I was just a dirt bag You could kick and ...
Jan 28, 2012 -
Re: Rules To Follow, For A Safe Heart
Trust no one Keep it fake Cause they’ll bring ya down And make your heart break Keep it real Don’t have any illusion Cause you’ll never heal When they’ll never ...
Jan 28, 2012 -
Re: A Fools Heart
I liked this poem. Not bad at al!! :) And this part made me smile: Damn the dreams I dream! Haha i liked that! ;=) Keep up the good work. ...
Oct 25, 2011 -
Re: Because You Don’t See Me
Its Like a slash in my flesh A searing in my body A breaking in my heart A tearing in my soul… I look at you all day long But ...
Oct 20, 2011 -
Re: Spring Love
Wow! I Looooooooooooooooooooooooooooooved this poem!! :D And i must congratulate youu, caus ei dont usually read poems with that sort of structure -__- But yours was... Mind blowing! ^^ LoL. ...
Sep 26, 2011 -
Re: Invade My Heart
Wow. I really liked his piece. The way you express your feelings, the way its written. Ah yes and also the repition. keep it up! ;)
Sep 25, 2011 -
Re: Pysical Appearance
You say that im ugly And all I do is laugh it off You make fun of me And I just shrug it off You talk about my teeth The ...
Sep 23, 2011 -
Re: My Perfect Girl
Wow! That was... TOUCHING ! I really loved it! How awesomely sweet. :) Im sure you'll find her one day! Just you wait! ;)
Sep 19, 2011 -
Re: Unheard Screams- a 9/11 Memorial
Wow that was very touching! Loved it!
Sep 9, 2011 -
Re: Revolution!
So this is a poem i wrote two years ago, when we were studying the french revolution! -__- haha. Why so much blood? Why so much terror? Why such a ...
Aug 31, 2011 -
Re: Stalker
Ohhhh! Nice! Its only at the very end that i understood you were talking of hte moon. -___- Haha! Nice one! At the beginning, i thought you were talking of ...
Aug 30, 2011 -
Re: Everytime he smiles
Awwww !! :D So first off, this story was quite short and well there wasn't much drama or intrigue as I first thought there would be. -__- But it was ...
Aug 29, 2011