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  • Narrative Poetry Re: Hidden reality

    It really does get the point across well. It's quite straigt-forward (which isn't my favourite style) but I think that worked well in this case. It's strong and assertive. Well ...

    Sep 8, 2005
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Vision In Black Nail Polish [need guys opinion]

    It's really good. Can't wait for the next installment. (Only hope someone would look at my work...)

    Sep 8, 2005
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Untitled still

    Alright. Not being pushy but could someone kindly critique it?

    Sep 8, 2005
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Vision In Black Nail Polish [need guys opinion]

    I have nothing to say besides I love it. Good work.

    Sep 2, 2005
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Untitled still

    Alright here's a story I've started (it's not finished). All critisisms appreciated. --- Prelude “I’m sorry, alright? We can’t be together, it’s not going to work, and I don’t trust ...

    Aug 31, 2005
  • Lyric Poetry Re: You'll Still Make Me Smile

    It showed a lot of feeling. It was simple but I like it. Good job.

    Aug 30, 2005
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Belonging (A song)

    Here's a song I wrote. The concept is still a bit unclear even to myself, but it's basically about fitting in and my personal girl troubles. Hope you'll enjoy it. ...

    Aug 30, 2005
  • Other Poetry Re: Midnight At The Art Gallery

    It's me again. LOVED IT.

    Aug 30, 2005
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Leaving Works Two Ways.

    Inertia, 'tis me. Love this piece. So much feeling and great imagery.

    Aug 30, 2005


Stop being mean to your self-insert character, you're just being mean to yourself.
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