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Re: i wish
i wish you would confide in me all your secrets i wish you would hold me like there was no tomorow i wish that we could share sweet kisses and ...
Jan 28, 2006 -
Re: Suburban Paradise
Why am I the only person here, That's slowly feeling, Like I'm draining my life, That grass bright green, The sky sweet blue, My blank face just stares back at ...
Jan 28, 2006 -
Re: November light
(A small poem) November Light November light, you’re trying to fit in A place where nobody knows your name November light, look around You don’t belong here Can you see ...
Jan 28, 2006 -
Re: Who, What, When, Where, Why?
Sad. Moving. Loving. I like it. But I think the question thing is just too new to me... it just comes off as awkward. But I do believe it is ...
Jan 28, 2006 -
Re: Among the Crowd
In the midst of lies, And trying to fit in, You can see how hard people try, To conceal what they have within. Conforming to the ways of what's "popular" ...
Jan 28, 2006 -
Re: To Be Continued...
Our story isn't over, It's just commercial break. Wherever that I go, Your love with me I'll take. Our life together isn't over, And it will never end. Let me ...
Jan 28, 2006 -
Re: Hatred
Why do you hate me? Is it because I am different, or because i am not you? Why do you hate my friends? Is it because they are like me, ...
Jan 28, 2006 -
Re: Opiation
Er... why is it in italics? From the title, it sounds like an opiate is talking to the mass of others like him, and he is telling them to rise ...
Jan 28, 2006 -
Re: Opiation
Anyone?
Jan 27, 2006 -
Re: School aka Prison
Good for his age group. Tell him to keep at it.
Jan 26, 2006 -
Re: Opiation
Opiation (SImples minds, Complex Lies) Trust in my justice Fall unto prejudice and corporate metaphors Take my hand and trust this We’ll bypass and transcend on these whores For Good ...
Jan 26, 2006 -
Re: Belonging (A song)
Thanks. I get where you're coming from too. Looking back, it needs revision. Thanks and excuse my stupidity for posting it in the wrong section.
Sep 8, 2005 -
Re: Bluebird
That was amazing. It reminded me of something from Aesops Fables or something. Love it.
Sep 8, 2005 -
Re: Ying Yang, Inverted
That was a great poem. It was powerful and the imagery was nice too.
Sep 8, 2005 -
Re: Untie the Yellow Ribbon
It's a very good poem. The imagery was great. It really painted a picture in my mind. "ding dong ding dong surprise." -- Quite and obscure line, but in this ...
Sep 8, 2005
