Doubt

The end was very moving I thought. A good, tragic book. Loved it.

Really like this one. The edited version made it perfect. Keep it up.

Bravo, Bravo! I loved it. I love all your work.

I'd like to, if I may, direct you to a website of mine. It houses my series of poetry called The Searching Series that I'd like you to read and ...

Red ringed neck, scars of past mistakes The blades mark drips Barbed-wire chokehold on your breath Pink stained red permanently An incomplete circle of regret Let it drip, cleanse the ...

"I love you heaps" ? that sounds off.

Will do. Thanks.

Quite a poem. Not exactly my favourite style but it was nice.

*drools* Magnificent. And yes, very suspenseful. I really enjoyed that one. Your style of writing is inspiring. Every description is made better by your choice of words. Can't wait for ...

Indeed. Quite good for a ten-year old.

Yeah. When I decide to stop being lazy I'm going to revise that and the rest of chapter one (once written). Any comments on the actual story? Hello. My apologies ...

You know I thought it was great. :wink: Why the hell aren't you on MSN much, punk?!

Yeah. When I decide to stop being lazy I'm going to revise that and the rest of chapter one (once written). Any comments on the actual story?

Wow. Amazingly good imagery. Where the hell you get your inspiration (and vocabulary) from, is a mystery to me.

This is a 'very real' story, so I'm told by one of my good friends. Based in New York. This is the beginning of a story. Perhaps long, perhaps short. ...