Doubt

Deep and very relate-to-able. Beautiful in every sense of the word. Keep up the good work.

Perfect description that matched the concept imaculately. Good job.

I don't really have anything to comment, except that I think it's simplistically really good. It's said in such an innocent way that it sticks to your mind a lot ...

O Humanity These admirers, they admire These conspirers, they conspire I was reading this and thought, "Oh no... this won't work.. Admirers... admire..." but to my surprise it did. Saved ...

That was terrific. Really, it was. :thumb: I can't pick a favourite part because.. well, I'd rather not seperate awesome lines from awesome-er ones. Hah. In case that my response ...

Nice, typical poem. That's a compliment by the way. However, it was a tad ordinary. But the good kind. Haha, I'm the King Of Contradiction... Anyhow, I think maybe the ...

Wow. Wow. Excellent. First off... I really liked the concept. Secondly; naming River was genius. It just let it flow that much better and really accentuates the character a lot, ...

I love the rhyme structure, but it seems as if you were forcing the rhymes. Please don't - it just butchers the beauty that you have here. I agree with ...

I just love poetry that describes colour or uses colour to describe other things. Your poem was no different. Keep up the good work.

Hmm. I see what you're all getting at. I did try to hard I think. But nonetheless it's an inside thing, like all poems I guess, and it really does ...

You wrote that very elegantly. I really liked it. I've never heard TOOL, but I think I know what you mean about the abstract weirdness of certain music helping you ...

I once met a man who had the exact same idea as you for a story... naturally, I cut out his tongue and had special surgery performed on his brain ...

And I scream out for you For the no-one-in-particulars I call my friends And faintly a response surfaces the cold water Only a bubble Not you It was never you ...

Ok. This one's a bit abstract. If any of you have listened to the band TOOL then you'll surely know what this is about. If you haven't I strongly recomend ...

This is a story I've started writing in relation to my poetry series which really outlines, I think, the story and accentuates the series. So, here it is: Prelude: I ...