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Re: The Army of The Rulers of the Earth-Prologue
SORRY THE ONLY THING I CAN THINK OF TO SAY IS, "GOOD WILL ALWAYS WIN" IS SO FUNNY!!!!! (bear in mind that i am an evil twin as well as ...
Dec 14, 2010 -
Re: Hazel-chapter 3
IM COMMENTING EVEN TOUGHT THERE NOTHING HERE. Y'KNOW WHY??????? CUZ IM EVIL :P
Dec 14, 2010 -
Re: Hazel-chapter 3
Muuuuuuuuucccchhhh better PippiChan. It actually makes sense. Congrats on using peoples suggestions in making it a bit more realistic without totally contradicting what you previously wrote. :P Though
Dec 14, 2010 -
Re: Insolitus Academy Chapter Two
Deleted. Kaput. Gone. Need I continue? Sincerest apologies. :P
Dec 3, 2010 -
Re: Hazel- chapter 2
I feel Adalyn needs more...character. She's just not....realistic? I don't know, it just feels like she's too.....obvious. Hazel would have to be reasonably air headed and/or thick not to put ...
Dec 3, 2010 -
Re: My life according to school
WAS IT KENNEDY'S IDEA TO NAME THE BABY ALEHANDRO? I BET IT WAS. O_O
Dec 3, 2010 -
Re: Insolitus Academy Chapter One
Yes I know I have a few typo's you peoples don't need to keep telling me, at least not on the same page. And it won't kill you to read ...
Dec 2, 2010 -
Re: Insolitus Academy Chapter One
Yeah...I copied this directly from my word document, and for some reason you can't see the indents when its posted. I don't want to double space it because that would ...
Nov 28, 2010 -
Re: Insolitus Academy Chapter One
If all you peoples can think of is spelling/grammar mistakes then I personally think this is a success!! But I appreciate the reviews and i hope you'll read the next ...
Nov 26, 2010 -
Re: Insolitus Academy Chapter One
Deleted as of next year. :P Will not be returning(unless I revise or something, which is unlikely). Sorry. :P
Nov 25, 2010 -
Re: When the Sisters Come Out
I just.....don't get it. ^^' Is that bad? Who're the Sista's supposed to be? At first I thought maybe night and day but the whole 'feastn 'pon yur soul' stuff ...
Nov 25, 2010 -
Re: Haunted
Oooooooo it's....creepy. ^^ I respect that. it'd be better if there weren't so many grammar/spelling errors, I just had to say that. And it'd be nice if there was more ...
Nov 25, 2010 -
Re: Hazel- chapter 1
Oooooooooohh the misspellings~ They buuuuuuurrrrnn.. O-O Not that you don't got potential PippiChan. ^^ Those kinds of things just....bother me. Though, if da witch is tellin' Hazel that she saved ...
Nov 25, 2010 -
Re: Very Brief Prologue
I hath deleted this story and it will not be returning. Ever. Sincerest apologies. :P
Nov 25, 2010 -
Re: EvERlaSTinG
Am I? I don't mean to be. Honestly I think I say things like that just to try and cover for just how atrocious I was on the details and ...
Nov 25, 2010
