DoomBlade87

Reality store??? I remember that, I came up with this really complicated thing where my first born child who I had with my divorced second husband was a piano prodigy ...

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So it's about.......insanity? No probably not. >< Actually I'm kidding, Pippi told me what this was about, but that's just what I would/might be thinking if I had just read ...

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O-O It....be....so....COOL. Love the voice, love the hinting of plot and background, love kickass girls in general. I'm going to go read the next part now. Rite on. :P

It does??? O-o I didn't notice. But then again I wrote it so....yeah. ^^' But tank u fur yur dedication, lack of comments make me feel lonely. And yeah I've ...

I like it. I like Astor, it's always good to have someone who likes to talk to get some development going. By the way, did you ever tell us what ...

I.....er......don't get it. =.= Okay maybe......a little.....but it's so confuzzeling......maybe if i read it again. *approximately twelve seconds later* Nope still don't get it. Maybe it's about.....

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It's a......thing. I respect the thing. Yes I do. =.= Anyway, I like it. I like it awfully much. ^^ I can't think of anything to correct, so that must ...

I know you said it's not an actual story seems rushed. There's too much stuff that isn't explained and not enough detail. Sort of like it's a page torn out ...

Uhhh.......it's.......okay. The thing with the hair seems kind of random, and why would she be afraid just because her hair stayed clean and she couldn't cut it? Is it a ...

ITS ITS ITS ITS!!!! .....I forgot. Oh well! It couldn't have been very important if I forgot. Anyway, I liked it! It gave the impression of urgentness-ness and kind of ...

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You're so right. They never go to the bathroom. So I guess that no matter the story fictional characters all have one common super power....bladders of steel. O-O I wish ...