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Could you review the beginning of my fantasy novel? I would very much appreciate it, Thanks :D

Could you review my novel that I have started, so far I have only put up the prologue. Would gladly appreciate it! :D

Can you review a book I am writing?? It's a realistic/drama book. I only have the prologue and first chapter right now though. I would appreciate it, thanks. :D prologue- ...

Can you review my Novel - Wasn't Mine To Take. I would very much appreciate it. Thank you Prologue- First Chapter-

Can you please review the first chapter to a novel I am writing? My Prologue is already up too. Thanks :D Prologue - First Chapter -

May I ask you to take a look at this? Please. I would love a honest review. I am thinking about making that story a book.

Hey guys, I just wanted to say thank you for reading this and giving me feedback. It means a lot to me. :D I am actually going to go through ...

Samantha: I jerked awake to the ring of my alarm clock. Another day to act like the last two days didn’t happen. I walked to the kitchen where I put ...

There are a lot of punctuation errors throughout these chapters, i would go back and read through your story. But I did love these chapters, they could be lengthened though. ...

OK, I don't have much to say. So here we go, I would let the story drag out more before he asks "Do you like me". I would want to ...

OK, first off this chapter is REALLY short. All in all the reader gets ingaged and wants to know more. In my opinion, I would separate what the characters say ...

Ever had a dream that felt so real? A dream, where you could feel his fingertips on your skin, His arms hugging you around your waist and his lips on ...

Mickey :)

Saying she surprisingly fell into a light and fitful sleep doesn't make much sense. For the most part, when you're upset, you don't sleep well, so it shouldn't have been ...

I loved this chapter, you have a good plot going so far. My advice is to not make it like every other teenage romance novel people have read, try and ...