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I'M a goose! HAH! Beat that! I--aw dang, that's what she said.

Thanks Elizabeth :) Wow! That is really cool looking. I like how she's wearing a mask. I think the hair should go up at the end, to mirror the two ...

your mom's a goose.

Would it be possible to add a word count function for each post? I don't know how useful it would be for some things, but it could be useful for ...

Well if you want to play it THAT way, blondes are hotter--I single handedly make it so ;)

teehee, looks like he's going to blowdry me to death

I can see why this is the YOUNG Writers Socioety. The votes reflect it :roll:

Snoink, he's not a janitor at a school; read curse you, READ. He's at an office building eh.

I put metal--and by metal, I mean Nu-Metal and Heavy Metal.

Wow. I am awed at both the greatness of the story and at Snoinks critiquing prowess. Snoink your crazy. lol. Bravo to both of you. Jigsaw--this was your reaction to ...

How about a landing perch? Maybe you could even not use a term for it, just describe it.

The barbarian has no weapon of his own, either... Even though we come into the scene right in the middle of a fight, you should still fill us in, else ...

I agree with Snoink--character interaction is key--there are certain things you just can't get through with dialogue alone, such as tone... Otherwise, nice work. As usual, I'm a bit late ...

Foam is a rootbeer float--without rootbeer. It is a combination of Cherry Sprite (regular Sprite works, in an emergency situation ONLY) and Strawberry Ice Cream. It is HEAVENLY.

Ugh. Come on kids, learn your stuff. Caliber refers to how the length of the diameter of the bullet in inches. Therefore the diameter of a 0.50 Caliber bullet would ...