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I have no clue what this is but it kept me entertained... lol. I like the refrences to diversity (race and sexuality). I don't quite grasp the concept of the ...

I'm slightly confused, why don't they wanna go to sleep if they dream about this lover when they do sleep? I don't like the word choice of "guess" but I ...

Oooo, I like this. It reminds me of something I wrote awhile ago, lol. I like the anger expressed. Fight was mispelled, might want to fix that. I think it's ...

Ooooo, I'm excited for the finale :-P. Where did the narrator's mean tone go? I missed it :(, lol. I was kinda confused @ first about Ethan gettin cold, you ...

This was a little short, and a liitle too-much-information, but still good. Thing that bugged me: The Main character (don't hate me but I forgot his name), says "...because you ...

“She’s so good that I heard she could paint with her pussy,” So... Well I couldn't picture a gay guy saying that! I completely disagree :-P. That's exactly something a ...

Damn Brad, that almost made me cry. I love it ;). Do you have a book published yet? :-P

I've read the first three chapters and here is what I think so far: You actually remind me of myself as a writer when I was younger, LOL. Writing about ...

Hmmm... so much to say. First, I LOVE the opening. It is grasping and almost a societal commentary on what we are turning into. It's BEAUTIFUL. Second, "depressing blues and ...

Ahhh! I want more, LOL. Very entertaining ^_^. Do the next ones, quickly! :)

I like it, the characters are entertaining (although mom and dad seem to be a bit boring at the moment :P). I like Teddy though, kids are always fun.

I like this poem, even though I'm not entirely sure what it is about. I just like the essence of the mystery of what is out there O_o... lol.

I love it, I think it's beautiful. I think what makes writing most beautiful is when it comes from a real experience and it gives it much more "umph" and ...

Carol was a thin woman in her late fifties. She scurried out of her house and knocked on her neighbor’s door rapidly. She was in a fix and her neighbor, ...

Lol, I'm somewhat confused ^_^. Why the hell is there a man in the horse? :-P The opening wasn't as funny since it was repeated, but the fact that it ...