DoctorClicky

Ok... so this is a Dialogue for a class (I could have sworn there was a school work help section but I can't find it, oh well). I would really ...

I love the joke about the baby's "x-mas present." I thought the part in the beginning with killing people on the video game could be better. I didn't flow for ...

Immaculate Part Two: Hope I arrived at Vanessa’s house. The silence continued. I approached the front door and pressed the doorbell. There was no response. Each growing moment of silence ...

Man, this is the Reseach Section . I believe that Doctorclicky was the one who diverted this topic into a conversation- no hostile feelings, just an observation, This is probably ...

“Yes you are. your cousin Amanda will be there and she’s bringing one of her friends.” “I’m definitely not going up there!” Not that he wouldn't mind seeing Amanda though, ...

Immaculate Part One: Silence I awoke to an unusually quiet morning. It didn’t concern me at first when I realized nobody else in my family had woken up yet. I ...

Well this may sound a bit mean, but... I just think that it might not be the smartest thing to write about something you know nothing about. I mean, usually ...

The world makes a lot more sense to me if God is in control. No offense, but I really don't see how anyone could live in any sort of sane, ...

This is something that's always puzzled me with atheists/agnostics. As a Christian, I believe that God defines good and evil in the Bible. As someone who doesn't know if there's ...

Just wanted to address your question. Don't mean to offend or anything. Nor do I intend to argue or get into an intense debate with you whatsoever, lol. ... The ...

Hahahah, that was actually really funny. That was a very clever idea (santa being evil) you put into your story, I like it a lot. ^_^ Keep writing!

Ahhhhh, I get it. I like the twist at the end. Is Psychopath the correct word (I always associated that with killers but I could be wrong)? Split personality might ...

A few spelling mistakes (new-->knew, ntelligent-->intelligent) but overall it's good. The plot is explained clearly and it interests me. I shall go find Chapter 1 and see what it's about. ...

I cracked open the book, breathing in the delicious smell of new books. The word deliscious makes me think something is edible and tasty, not exactly a word I'd use ...

“That, is a stick,” he retorted as Charlie [s]dropped[/s] instantly dropped his smug expression. You have dropped in there twice, fix this so it makes sense? It seems rather short ...