DiskElemental

Hey, Looking to get a bit of feedback on the first part of the first chapter of my NaNo novel. I'm largely interested in making sure it "works" as a ...

Hey, Looking to get a bit of feedback on the first part of the first chapter of my NaNo novel. I'm largely interested in making sure it "works" as a ...

Hey, I'm trying to figure out if this excerpt works as an opening to a novel. I'd ideally like to know what you know about the characters/setting after reading the ...

My current NaNo project ends with the protagonists being forced to choose between two equally distasteful options. They never asked for it, they don't want to make it, they're forced ...

Beneath the skin, she saw wires.

Definitely something to do with music, possibly a murder mystery at an orchestra? Not my cup of tea, so I'd probably pass on it. Either way, the two plural nouns ...

I do not see why we would want to make a place of punishment a calm or reasonable place (If you want to know, yes I do believe a rapist ...

However (iirc), the one thing all versions of the Bible do have in common is relatively little about the devil, and even less about hell. The concept of Satan as ...

Title: A Light for Tomorrow Plot: The world is turning into a desert. No one knows why, how, or what to do about it, and it's spreading. In a desperate ...

cC summoned me, so I have returned. At least until NaNo is done.

Violent videogames don't make you violent, and I'll kill anyone who says otherwise.

I've already got a role, I just didn't get my stuff in.

Hey guys, sorry for not submitting my stuff yet. The last week or so has been completely dominated by Gencon. I should have everything done today.

I'll be the Smart Guy.

What I'm arguing is that all contributions are of equal value, and that the concept that contributions can be unequal is an extremely damaging one, partially because it assigns values ...