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I like this. It's nice to read about werewolves once in a while, they don't get talked about often, with all the Edward Cullen madness going around (no offence on ...

Hey, Kamas, um, I wouldn't mind a review. I'm currently working on an action adventure piece, I don't know if that will interest you but I'd really like some more ...

Woa! You really need to break this down, it's too much for anyone to read let alone digest. Work on the paragraphs so you can draw your readers in.

I really like this, i was sucked in instantly. you have some awesome descriptions, vivid but not lengthy, sometimes that's the best way to keep readers intrigued. I'm curious to ...

Thanks for the review. I knew the slang might be a bit annoying to some people but I'm hoping you can get used to it because I'm trying to reflect ...

This is insanely good, you had me glued from the first line. Even though there isn't any dialogue I was sucked into the story. The way you describe everything, I ...

Whoa, this is deep and creepy but i love it. keiraan's right you definitely needed to slow things down a little but other than that this was great. I'll definitely ...

Hey, a newbie here to give my first review! Whoa, you write quite well for an eleven year old, I'm impressed! Since scion gave you a thorough review I'll just ...

Hey everyone. So, I just joined today and was a bit too shy to introduce myself in the welcome area [I know, weird right?] Anyway, I thought I'd introduce myself ...