DirrtyMoney

Thanks Areida, I really appreciate it

Thanks mate, I'm glad you enjoyed it :)

Thanks, Lava, I really appreciate it! I've gone back and made the changes. :)

Hey Lava, I'd really like a review for the 2nd chapter of my action/adventure story. It's got swearing in it so I hope you don't mind, if that is a ...

So here's the second chapter. You'll be pleased to notice that I haven't used a single asterik lol. Thanks again to my reviewers your comments and suggestions really helped and ...

Hey, um, I wouldn't mind a review. I'm currently working on an action adventure piece, I don't know if that will interest you because it does have swearing in it, ...

I hope you continue with this, Quetseli, it's too good to end here. Best of luck!

Man, this is so cool, I just had to review! You describe the mid-set of your MC brilliantly, especially in the first paragraph, the emotions were spot on. You also ...

Hey, Tomothy, DirrtyMoney here! Firstly, welcome to YWS! The title drew me in to read this. Lauren2010 said it all, this story was really interesting to read, you can tell ...

Hey, I'm currently working on an action adventure piece, I don't know if that will interest you but I'd really like some more opinions especially on improvements. Here's the link ...

Hey, Demeter, um, I wouldn't mind a review. I'm currently working on an action adventure piece, I don't know if that will interest you because it does have swearing in ...

Glad you enjoyed it, mate :D Thanks for the review!

Hey! I like this. You describe your MC's emotions quite well and I like your narration too. The bit where your character's like, "God?" that was hilarious, good job! One ...

Thanks for the review, mate, I really appreciate it. Your first comment about the sentence, very true, I'll go back and edit that tomorrow. Regarding the cursing, the reason why ...

Thanks, curious, I'm glad you liked it.