DiannePan

The moon’s skin was tightly stretched over its gaunt face, she seemed starved without the nightly secrets behind the purged, shut rooms. Through transparent curtains dull light leaked into the ...

" His voice lay in her mind like a bedded lover. I I love this line- a perfect start She'd been overanalyzing every word he'd said today, each time uncovering ...

IN THE JUNGLE THERE ARE… …Layers of chlorophyll skin that yields to sabers, splits And bleeds Juice Over the hunters’ caps and backs. Their boots crack and mud seeps In ...

By clicking “submit” I enter a chunk of hush-hush truth about myself with this story. Funny, my thoughts always seem to be caught in-between clichés; that is, when I feel ...

Hello there, Well this was definitely an excellent read. I absolutely loved the way you didn't pile your story with ornate adjectives and that you didn't drone on and on ...

Haha! Goodness! This grabbed my attention as I'm an editor for our HS newspaper. What you wrote is so true, it's a bit like an implicit truth about HS, no ...

First Hunt He had tile green calzone tugged in his high lacquered boots, he wore a dark beige vest and a hunting cap over his meticulously gelled hair. He gripped ...

Hello there, This is just gorgeous. I've rarely read something so short but with so much raw emotion. Really your presice vocabulary, the rhythm and tone of it all is ...

You get bored easily and surf the net filling your time with garbage; the contaminated time seeps into your bloodstream and you feel infected with idleness. Hunched over the computer ...

Hello there, Since this is supposed to be a serious piece of work I decided to make a *serious* review for it. Maria hobbled from her straw bed, dressing on ...

He was furious! He fumbled with his wine-red tie, and his impeccably rich, massive ring hungrily absorbed and spitted out the light that fell on it. The ring was firmly ...

Hello there, I can't believe my luck that I am the first one to write a comment for this! Would you mind creating a visual workpiece (your choice of media) ...

Hello there, This is the thrid time I am trying to write a review for you for the pictures above due to the idiocity of my computer SO I hope ...

Hello there, whoever you are reading this right now. Thank you for your time in advance; this a rather personal piece for me as it was written inspired by many ...

Hello there:3 First the nit-picks L- leaving the other one alone. - The base of every relationship O- over you. - I am so over you! Until that party next ...