DevanEWilliams

Hey there! Awesome poem you have here! It seems simple at the beginning, but it gets deeper into a more symbolic piece. One thing that I think you should work ...

Hello there! Just so you know, I don't read/review this type of story very often so my suggestions may or may not work for you. That's perfectly fine. Here we ...

Hey there! Your poem had a really good message that pretty much everyone can relate to. Unfortunately, a few confusing line/punctuation things caused me to misunderstand your meaning when I ...

I looove this story! It is so funny, yet it's a bit sad. I think it can also be symbolic....or maybe I'm reading too much into it, I don't know ...

Hello there! I think what you have in this story is great so far, but there are some things that could definitely be refined more. First, you have many grammatical ...

Hey there! You have a wonderful poem that can be interpreted in many different ways. Your images are great, and you can really get a good sense of what the ...

Hey, great poem! Your imagery was awesome! I have two smallish things that I would like to point out. You don't have to change it, but it's just what I ...

Sorry about the length... :wink: Please like/comment! Samantha. My name is Samantha. My name is Samantha Kendall. My name is Samantha Jane Kendall. For a reason that I could not ...

This actually came about from a writing exercise assignment for my Short Stories class, but I guess I took it a bit further than I was supposed to. :D I ...

I didn't write this for any particular reason, but I thought is was nice. I'm usually not the best with rhyming but this one turned out well in my opinion. ...

Hey Hayden! So I'm just going to point out a few things that I noticed. (It's wonderful, by the way :D) One thing that kinda irked me was the fact ...

Hey there! Your story is quite interesting so far! I'd like to see what happens; it definitely has lots of potential. There are just a few things that need worked ...

Hey there! First, let me just say that I thought this story was really interesting. It's written quite wonderfully. It was kind of sad, but so very hopeful at the ...

Hello! First of all, let me just say that I love your writing style. You describe things in really beautiful ways so that I can see it very clearly in ...

I would greatly appreciate it if you reviewed this. I'm entering it in a contest and I need as much help as I can get! :D Thanks so much!