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Re: Ask a stupid question...
Because Frosty the Snowman said so. Why do trees have bark?
Feb 26, 2012 -
Re: YWS: Apollo Updates Thread
Hey Nate, this is absolutely random, but I think it would be really neat if there were a flash fiction category for super short stories. Would that be a good ...
Feb 23, 2012 -
Re: Insanity
This is really cool! I think you did a really good job of portraying the proper emotion. The eyes do look quite crazy, but almost scared. One thing that I ...
Feb 23, 2012 -
Re: Collaborative Works?
I apologize in advance if this is in the wrong category...there didn't seem to be much of a place for it anywhere else. :wink: I am currently writing a short ...
Feb 23, 2012 -
Re: Shooting Stars' Reviewing Company! (Open for Forever)
Hello! Could you review this for me please? Thank you! :D
Jan 19, 2012 -
Re: Charms
Amy sat under the willow tree, its dying leaves whispering in the chilling breeze. Her silver bracelet caught the light of the descending sun every few moments, glaring and disrupting ...
Dec 14, 2011 -
Re: Luminosity
Hello there! Since you reviewed my piece, I decided to return the favor. :D If you go into the forest, just far enough so that you begin to wonder if ...
Dec 10, 2011 -
Re: Lauren's One Stop Critique Shop
I would just love a couple reviews on my most recent two short stories! Thanks so much! ~Devan
Dec 10, 2011 -
Re: Rate the avatar above you! [5]
10/10. That is unbelievably adorable.
Dec 10, 2011 -
Re: My Best Friend's a Ghost, Chpt. 1
Hello there! I have never reviewed a novel before, so I apologize if it is weird or lame or something. :) Since this chapter is all we have so far, ...
Dec 10, 2011 -
Re: A Ray of Hope
This is my FINISHED version of the story I posted a while ago. I am so glad to be finished with the draft :D Suggestions would be great! EDIT: I ...
Dec 3, 2011 -
Re: Double Vision
Hello, all! This story was taken from a dream that I experienced a while ago, which is why it is extremely confusing and almost paradoxical at times. Possibly entering it ...
Nov 29, 2011 -
Re: Untitled as of Yet. (Unfinished)
Hello all. This is maybe halfway done, but I feel like I'm getting really far behind on it (it's for a class) and would like some feedback for what I ...
Nov 15, 2011 -
Re: Walking Disasters
Hello! I'm just going to review this, if you don't mind ;) Overall, I think several aspects of your story went extremely well-you established the setting right away, and your ...
Nov 9, 2011 -
Re: Homesick
Hello there! I think the emotion that you put into this poem is very real, and I can tell you really put your heart into it. Wonderful job! Your imagery ...
Nov 9, 2011