Dethl

Great beginning, I like how you introduced the reader with the fight, and I also love Ailia's personality. I don't really have any complainment or suggestion about this. Waiting for ...

Its sound pretty cool! by now it seems like it can develop an interesting story line, I would like to read more :wink:

Shinigamis from Japanese folk can be a good base for your creatures. A Shinigami is a Japanese Death God, Part of their abilities is the fact that they can mess ...

A Grimoire is a magic book that includes instructions on how to create magical objects like talismans and amulets, how to perform magical spells, charms and divination and also how ...

Cool, I also play piano and love photography :D

The Preface was amazing! It left that mysterious feeling that makes people continue reading, but I must say that the first chapter wasn't that good. The dream was detailed, but ...

I'm kind of addicted to comas, and I think that I over-use them....great tips!

Of course XD I'm doing a lot of research and working in organization and event charts to build the entire series, I might start writing the next week.

Easy, typing "Forums for Young Writers" in google! :D

This poem is great! its short but powerful, i like it :D

Thanks for the advises! Yea I think I'll start for reviewing some stuff, the storybook RPGs thing sounds interesting I'll give it a try :wink:

Thanks! what would you suggest me to do first? I'm still working on the first chapter of my project so I have a few days before submitting it.

This is good, i like his attitude, you know his sarcasm - the way he expresses himself, my toughs (and the plot XD) tell me that this will be a ...

:) Hi! I'm new here (obviously XD) So I've never been good when it comes to forum introductions, I'm Dethl, you can call me Dethl or Cloud, I'll turn 16 ...