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I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!

AAAH!! thank you!! *megatackle hugs* it was awesome!

WHY ARE YOU SO CRUEL? WHYYYY? *falls onto her knees crying, then falls into a fetal position* whyyyyyyyyyy! Also i loved it :grin:

No possible words can describe this unless you make up some new form of word which means that this story is amazing!!! great job Pointe!

LOOOOOOOVED it! your amazing at thi! please don't take too long with the next two chapters!

i loved it, great work describing everything!

i LOVED it! great job! i really love the idea of teenagers saving the world! it sort of gives a new strength to teens everywhere! great job Pointe!

great job on this chapter, i simply love it! well done!

love the story! it gives a great description about how teenagers can get into sticky situations like this and hide them, as well as makes a great story, great job ...

i cant wait for the next chapter please dont take too long this story is too good to end!

good job in this one! your aspiring to be one heck of a writer! i would probably be one of the first to buy this book! i love the story!

great job! it's really good and not only do i like the complete whole of the story and their passion for eachother but i also love the amazing cliffhanger at ...

i really liked this actually it made a lot of sense and i could really relate to it!most teenagers could cause at this time in our lives we truly barely ...

thanks this is only the prolouge of the story, to be honest (just as a little spoiler) at first you might not even realize this has a lot to do ...

i loved it! a few things here and there but it was beatifully done! great job!