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Re: She Was Blind
I love it! I just love it! Though you do repeat the words "She was blind" just a teensy bit too much, but other than that a fnatstic story with ...
May 21, 2011 -
Re: Corrupt a Wish [3]
Granted, you strained it so well, you ended up with water instead of tea I wish my WriterFeed Pad would open!
May 18, 2011 -
Re: Affairs of the Heart chapter 1
Chapter 1 "Alicia, whats wrong?" asked Adriana, her teacher, she walked closer to her, knowing she might not want to blurt it out to the whole class. Alicia just burst ...
May 17, 2011 -
Re: Romeo & Juliet: Instant Messaging Edition
I just have one thing to say: DO MACBETH NEXT! DO MACBETH NEXT! PLEEEEEAAAAASSSSEEE!!!! also, great job on this one! mega thumbs up! ~~Destiny110
May 17, 2011 -
Re: How History Revision is WRONG AND MAKES NATE A POOPIEHEAD.
Any revision is wrong! especially when it talks about crazy people in words which you do not understand! Exhibit A: MACBETH! Seriously...Shakespeare needs a different hobby! [capsmurder]AND WHY ARE TH
May 16, 2011 -
Re: First kiss
I love it! Amazing Imagery, amazing ending, ladies and gentlemen we have a new William Shakespeare! Though I did notice a few teensy tiny mistakes: She dipper her head; half ...
May 15, 2011 -
Re: Love, Pain, and Chocolate (chapter 2)
Hey again! Short but sweet, I like it! though I did notice a few mistakes: Cynthia shook her head yes. That would be nodded . Generally when a person shakes ...
May 15, 2011 -
Re: Love, Pain, and Chocolate (chapter 1)
Ok first of I love/hate this story! I love it because the imagery and idea is amazing, I hate it because John is a ******* that deserved to die, so ...
May 15, 2011 -
Re: Never Before YWS
Love the poem! It's completely relatable to me, I love YWS! Anyway I love the poem and great job, even if you just wrote it that day it looks really ...
May 14, 2011 -
Re: The Magi [Ch.9}
Sweet Jesus holy christ mother of god and all the siants in heaven and GEEZUS! WOW that was a good story! though i did notice this one bit: “Remember it! ...
May 10, 2011 -
Re: Destiny prolouge
Thanks for all the reviews guy but if you wait just a little bit you'll understand the whole story, i still need to post the first chapter and it's taking ...
May 9, 2011 -
Re: Break That Fall{Chapter2}*edited*
LOOOVVVVVEEE IIIIITTTTTTTTTTTTTT < yes i had to make it that long, it's how much i love it! I'm so happy for you Drama! And nice use of "God bless this ...
May 8, 2011 -
Re: My Dear Person
Hey Ishizzle! I loved this poem! there was this one bit: “You can’t see Him, how do you know that He’s there?” You can’t see oxygen either, but that’s what ...
May 6, 2011 -
Re: Corrupt a Wish [3]
Granted, but you accidentally choke yourself when you try to tie it your first time I wish I had a bigger chance with my crush (no its not the same ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: This week, we lost a brother.
He didn't care that he killed loads of people in 9/11! he didn't care about each and every precious human life in those buildings and around them! Why should we ...
May 3, 2011
