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Re: DELETED
really good job in writing this though there were a few mistakes but the top review already corrected them, i'm interested to see what the rash decision is and i ...
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Re: DELETED
All I thought about was growing up and leaving the rinky dink town I called home. We are sorry to inform you but your husband, George Bird, has been killed ...
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Re: A Journey - Part 1: Memory ~~(Chapter 1)~~
gives a good idea about rebellions in the past, while reading it an image of the French revolution popped up into my mind, i love the idea that the leader ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: Symptoms of Being a Teenager
i really liked this actually it made a lot of sense and i could really relate to it!most teenagers could cause at this time in our lives we truly barely ...
Jan 18, 2011 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here [7]
thats me lol
Jan 17, 2011 -
Re: Nicholas : Part One {final edit}
i loved the story though there were a few nitpicks here and there and i noticed that sometimes its in past tense and in others its in present tense, when ...
Jan 17, 2011 -
Re: Hide and Seek (Chapter One)
i like this story especially since its in the first person, i ike that sort of writing, don't ask me why, and it gives two sides of a story so ...
Jan 16, 2011 -
Re: Destiny prolouge
thanks this is only the prolouge of the story, to be honest (just as a little spoiler) at first you might not even realize this has a lot to do ...
Jan 16, 2011 -
Re: Can't Let You Go
i loved it! a few things here and there but it was beatifully done! great job!
Jan 15, 2011 -
Re: Draw Near To Me Chapters 4-5
the story is good but the chapters are too short, chapters 3-5 could be part of chapter 2! but overall i'd give it a 9.5 out of ten! grat job!
Jan 15, 2011 -
Re: Destiny prolouge
Alexander was a great and powerful warrior, who was part of a clan called the Numani clan. Defenders of mankind, the Numani clan rushed to the safety of others. But, ...
Jan 15, 2011 -
Re: Tomorrow
the story is good, i like the way it starts in the present and then sets off into the past to explain the story, i was bummed that it ended ...
Jan 15, 2011 -
Re: Welcome New Members! [2]
Hey! I'm destiny110 my real name is Bernice, Destiny is the name of the main character in my book. I'm thinking of posting the chapters on YWS. I'm new here ...
Jan 15, 2011 -
Re: DELETED
I love the story! it's very unique and obviously has a back story to it! possibly the whole "Lizzy" thing was just a mistake which is made by every human, ...
Jan 15, 2011
