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Re: The Magi {ch. 3}
Great job pointe, but i did notice a few things: saw Kevin standing over her and threw her arms around her neck. i actually tried that once i read it, ...
Feb 3, 2011 -
Re: The Magi {ch. 2}
i loved it, great work describing everything!
Feb 3, 2011 -
Re: The Magi {Ch. 1}
i LOVED it! great job! i really love the idea of teenagers saving the world! it sort of gives a new strength to teens everywhere! great job Pointe!
Feb 3, 2011 -
Re: Draw Near To Me Chapters 8-9
hey, great job on these two chapters, i was dying to read them, thank god for the feed tab on my profile ^_^ i did notice one mistake though I ...
Feb 2, 2011 -
Re: Pregnant Majesty - Chapter Two
great job on this chapter, i simply love it! well done!
Feb 2, 2011 -
Re: Pregnant Majesty - Chapter One
love the story! it gives a great description about how teenagers can get into sticky situations like this and hide them, as well as makes a great story, great job ...
Feb 2, 2011 -
Re: Irvamps (Reverse Vampires) Chapter 1
i noticed a couple of mistakes: I'm Liyam, a Irvamp. thinking that should be an not a like Ranger Hawk said overall the story is good, though i would try ...
Feb 2, 2011 -
Re: A Corrupted Angel (Working Title) Prologue
first off i'd just like to say, that the title is amazingly well placed, also i like the story, it is rather graphic but i have personal beliefs that a ...
Feb 1, 2011 -
Re: Snow- Preface and ch. 1
Hey Pointe! I love the story, it's really cool the way you've re-written a very classical story, so great job on that, but i would suggest spacing the information about ...
Feb 1, 2011 -
Re: Dandelions
i like this poem, it makes sense and gives a big impression about how we lose our innocence as we get older and that causes us to think very different ...
Feb 1, 2011 -
Re: Error 401
it's a really great poem elder, though I have to say it is rather straight forward, part of the beauty of a poem is the metaphors that the readers have ...
Feb 1, 2011 -
Re: The Bonding Ring = Ch.5
i cant wait for the next chapter please dont take too long this story is too good to end!
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: The Bonding Ring = Ch.3
good job in this one! your aspiring to be one heck of a writer! i would probably be one of the first to buy this book! i love the story!
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: The Bonding Ring = Ch.2
great job! it's really good and not only do i like the complete whole of the story and their passion for eachother but i also love the amazing cliffhanger at ...
Jan 30, 2011 -
Re: The Bonding Ring = Ch.1
i really like the story, i mean i thought at first it would be weird, even for a girl who likes girls, to be kissed by a stranger or to ...
Jan 30, 2011