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  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Dreaded Dinner Party Chapter 8 pt. 2

    Thank you, thank you so much for the kind words. I honestly hadn't thought about adding breather space until now, so I will try to add some!

    May 3, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Dreaded Dinner Party Chapter 8 pt. 2

    Thanks so much for the review! Curi's homeschooled so she doesn't have much of a chance to meet people, which is why she kind of clings to Toki and Cooleo. ...

    May 3, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, General Re: Dreaded Dinner Party Chapter 8 pt. 1

    Thank you for the review! I'm glad you thought the details were good because that's what I have always been told I need to improve on. Sorry if the story ...

    May 2, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, General Re: Dreaded Dinner Party Chapter 8 pt. 1

    Thank you for the review! Wolfeman can come off as a bit intimidating due to his tall size and aloof way of speaking, so that's why Curi thought it was ...

    May 2, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, General Re: Dreaded Dinner Party Chapter 2

    Thank you for the review! I will try to make a lot of changes and take out the repetitiveness. Oh, "word is bond" is slang.

    May 2, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, General Re: Dreaded Dinner Party Chapter 8 pt. 1

    Thank you for reviewing. The party's late in the evening, so most of the people went directly there after work. I suppose Naomi was just a bit caught off guard, ...

    Apr 30, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, General Re: Dreaded Dinner Party Chapter 1

    Thanks for the review, Sky! To answer your questions: Curi was about 8 or 9 in the prologue and is currently a teenager (I don't have a specific age but ...

    Mar 26, 2017
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: Ice

    Hi and thank you for the review, MJTucker. I realize I have to really review my commas, and I honestly had no clue that I should use "non-manicured." Anyway, the ...

    Mar 14, 2017
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: Ice

    Thank you, sincerely thank you. I should know these things, but the encouragement helps. c:

    Mar 14, 2017
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: Ice

    Thanks! If I ever continue this concept, I will definitely make sure to answer those questions.

    Mar 14, 2017
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: Ice

    Thank you for the review, lovesannie21! You're doing just fine. Sometimes, I struggle with commas, so I will make sure to revise this. Thanks for the encouragement as well because ...

    Mar 14, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, General Re: Dreaded Dinner Party Chapter 7

    Thank you for the review!

    Mar 14, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, General Re: Dreaded Dinner Party (Prologue)

    Thank you for reviewing so quickly. I definitely listened to your suggestions and made the changes. Grammar is a huge thing I need to work on.

    Mar 4, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, General Re: Dreaded Dinner Party Chapter 7

    You brought up really good points, so I made some changes. Why the Digis house Wolfeman is a plot point, but I did add that the news surprised Curi. Sorry, ...

    Mar 1, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Humor, General Re: Dreaded Dinner Party Chapter 1

    Thank you for the thorough review, Lucrezia. I don't mind the length at all, and I am thankful for the detailed explanations you give. Also, I am glad you like ...

    Feb 24, 2017


When people are free to do as they please, they usually imitate each other.
— Eric Hoffer