Desire

Thanks so much for the help :) Took your advice and will have to wait and see now what others think :) xxx

thanks to all the reviewers :) Really appreciate your reviews!! To hazellgreene: To be honest I didn't intend on writing it in that style, just kind of went with it ...

Female 17 Not allowing fear to keep me from doing great things

She stands in front of the mirror She is naked She is scared She is self-conscious She is sick She sees flabby arms, others see figures resembling the width of ...

Hi there :) This poem is very dramatic and descriptive, well done! Just something you might want to take a look at. The line that says "My tears banged against ...

Thanks for the review :) It always means alot that a person would take time in the firs place to review my stuff ! To give a bit more background ...

I loved this!!! It's got such a beautiful message of hope among despair ! I didn't think the rhyming was forced at all (no offence to the previous reviewer :D ...

Hi thank you so much for your post :) I was really nervous about submitting stuff! I'll definitely take a look at that line and maybe see what other people ...

I thought that this piece was fantastic! There was never a boring moment and I felt as though it was taking me on a journey with each line! I loved ...

Three years ago you left. The warning you gave did not give me enough time Enough time to think, enough time to know... to know what to do. There was ...

This poem seems honest. It seems like you aren't afraid to write about stuff that's filled with pain and heartache. It's a very inspiring piece that I really enjoyed. Looking ...

Hey guys :) A friend introduced me to this site! Really amped to find a site like this that allows u to share writing and also just motivates a person ...