Desire

Wow... alot of anger portrayed in these lyrics! I got the impression that you were speaking about someone you really loved but all the bullsh#t just messed up your relationship ...

Poetry is a great way to express how you feel and I think you did exactly that in this poem! This poem might have a few errors but if people ...

I really enjoyed this poem! When I first read it I thought it was about people but then got the impression that it's about flowers?? Just few things that I ...

I have to agree with Liesonlies! The lyrics are really good and that's what we're focusing on here and telling us what's gonna happen with the song (although I get ...

As I lay in the thick grass, I couldn’t help but close my eyes. The pain was excruciating and as the dark red blood poured out from the bullet wound, ...

I like how this has no structure and that you just decided to write it freely. That is what writing is all about and what they have forgotten to teach ...

Thanks for the reviews guys, I'm entering this into a competition so really appreciate how positive your reviews have been :) Glad you liked my piece :) xxx

Everybody has dreams, desires, fears, curiosities and hopes. We've done things during the course of our lives that we will remember for as long as we live. Some of those ...

I got the sense that my "evil side" was speaking to me when I was reading this. Felt that it was kind of a "dark and twisty" type of poem, ...

This is absolutely amazing! The emotion portrayed here is so strong and the imagery is also very powerful! I love everything about it! Honestly do hope that you'll be making ...

THis is so cute :) Really fits well with your name and gives a little bit of an impression of what you're like! well done :) xxx

This is definitely one of those feel-good, happy poems :D I could just picture the whole thing as I was reading the poem! One line that I'm not quite sure ...

This poem is really expressive. After reading it I felt like u were trying to tell people that what they see is a lie, that you're actually hurting inside and ...

It began unexpectedly on the bleachers beside the pool. Summer gave no hints on what it had in store for us. I was oblivious but you knew all along. Sparks ...

This is beautiful! I love this poem so much :) You've told such a beautiful love story here so wonderfully! I loved the part where you spoke about how the ...