Desire

HI :) THis poem was short but very powerful! This is the way I interpreted it: You are asking God not to send you to hell even though you mess ...

Hello there :) I'll do my best to give you the best review possible - hope it helps you out a little bit :) In the first stanza you used ...

The warm summer's afternoon was coming to an end. As she lay in long, lazy grass, she felt calm, breathing in it's sweet and dry scent. Her head rested gently ...

What an adorable poem!!! This is one of my favorite poems that I've read lately! It's really just absolutely adorable (excuse the redundancy, rather look at it as an emphasis ...

This was such cute poem :) I really enjoyed the story that you told in it and was just really lovely to read - one of those "feel good" poems! ...

Today is your birthday and I wish you the best World’s greatest grandpa should be tattooed onto your chest You’re a great example and role-model to all Your life is ...

I can't see any changes that need to be made in this poem! Although I am not a muslim, I enjoyed this poem. I love it when people express how ...

I really enjoyed this poem :) Well done! You have portrayed such an important message here, one that I believe many girls need to hear. I thought your writing was ...

Why was this deleted ??? I was looking forward to reading it!

I like the story in here :) I was a bit confused in the beginning but I think it's about a girl who gets attacked by her mom because her ...

thanx for the reviews guys, im going to fix the typo :)

You think that you are in control of my life, That you have me, dangling at your dirty fingertips And that I am some marionette puppet you can control. You ...

I found this poem really really amazing! Your vocabulary is very good and the image you created here through your words was brilliant! You have such potential and if you ...

Ok so here is what I thought. Forgive me if it sounds a bit odd but here it goes... :) The rest of the photo is kinda blurred, putting an ...

What a thought! haha, this is definitely a poem that causes one (maybe those that aren't so strong in their faith) to question life, it's purpose and whether it isn't ...