Desdemona

Too random. I think you need to think about your plot and what you want to achieve before generating weird characters and lands.

I hope you did not send this in. It would have meant immediate rejection of you did. This contains a lot of repetition and it sounds like you're begging the ...

Shhhhhhhhhhh. Shush up yo' mouth. You don't know anything. Did J.K Rowling know she would become THE J. K Rowling? No! So you don't know if you'll be better than ...

Hello, child. You do this subtly, gradually. It could be like his heart broke more than the others' hearts when she died.Maybe he took a little longer to recover. Maybe ...

I'd love to try :) I'm hoping you'll like what I send