Derek

First and third are very good. The second one could use a better angle. Also it's a lot more focused then the other two flower pictures so that makes it ...

The characters are bland, the main character is a whiney, typical teenager. Whoopdidoo. Exactly, a modern teenager. Did you expect her to be different and sophisticated or unlike every other ...

Cliche's are overrated lol. People expect completely original books which is impossible. Not to mention a lot of cliche's might not even seam like a cliche to you because it's ...

I have read them, and I am sorry, but lots of sex doesn't count as "in-depth" to me. They had sex on their honeymoon, more then once of course, and ...

I never mention being fast/strong. I know "some" story's use that Also, not all vampires have used those abilities in the past, only in anime, or comic like situations. The ...

I have a good story :). My church group was on a youth conference and we stopped at the gas station to pick up some snacks and drinks for ourselves ...

I agree with you on the originality of Harry Potter but Twilight is pretty original as well. Vampire's being perfect human beings, shining diamond skin in the sunlight, each with ...

To some degree of course. Thought I can say I've met people who worship each other. It's not that unrealistic.

I think they shouldn't even be compared? Harry Potter is a much longer series based on magic and witchcraft. Twilight is based on vampires and the love of Bella and ...

-Decisions- The world's lies flow around me Darkness and fear of what is to come The decision that could change my life The choice of whether or not to continue ...

Thanks for your review. In that paragraph it's from 1 person's point of view. Her enemy is unknown to you, so she is the one firing the barrage of bullets. ...

Woots! It's done :D I know your happy lol. I fixed a lot of mistakes i made last chapter. And i hope you focus a lot on the storyline and ...

I was clueless back then. I can’t believe I did half the things that I did. But I would not want to redo it. “Why?” you may ask? Because if ...

This poem is from my story At the beginning of all my chapters there is a poem. This is the poem for Chapter 3. I might post the others, or ...

Wow this is a really good song! I think the chorus is repeated too many times, maybe another verse, or two would make it better. The chorus and rhyme is ...