Derek

So, previously this story was named Unknown Story due to not having a name. Until I figure one out it will be code name The Darkness just so I'm not ...

All right, explanation time. So, what is gonna happen is this is going to be the new Chapter 2. So no one is confused, insert this before the old Chapter ...

Hello again :D. I found some flaws! Yes! No wait that's not good. I apologies :lol: You are right, you did use Our hero way to much. lol. Other then ...

I do envy your writing skill. Much like the last time I found nothing wrong. Description was very good, writing was amazing like a pro writer to be honest. It ...

Yikes thank you Ranger! I swear I fixed some of those though when I reread it... But all is well and those mistakes have been fixed :].

Thank you everyone for your reviews! I've edited it so every review above this comment has been fixed :]. Thanks again.

So I love this chapter :]. Honestly I'd say it's some of my best work. I'll leave that up to you guys though! Try not to kill me to much ...

So, this is a side project of mine while my other story was just getting no inspiration! For some reason I've been getting images and idea's for a fiction. I ...

I enjoyed reading this! Nice job :D. Unfortunately I don't have the time right now to write a actual review but I'll just give some suggestions! So overall it was ...

Does that mean that the love is still living? Its a good poem though.:) The meaning is really that the love never existed at all :]. The Looking Glass could ...

I see you through the glass, eyes glowing like fire. Your love burns for me, though we cannot reach each other. Our hands we can see, pressed upon the glass. ...

I'm almost ashamed to call this a chapter. It's extremely short considering my so called promise in the last chapter I submitted. I will, make the chapters longer I swear. ...

Thanks guys. Sorry I didn't reply sooner! Yea, it's been hard to find a good place with my standards. I just figure a real city can be related too. Perhaps ...

The novel I'm currently writing is taking place in Texas, or Arizona for the simple fact that both states tend to have cities, surrounded by endless desert and roads. I ...

Something I didn't notice! I did not separate the PoV switches properly lol. I don't quite know how when I think about! Extra spacing between the paragraph? Chapter 3 Mindless ...