Derek

Ok i'm going to give you some good advice. If you make a short chapter it's easier to make a title for the chapter. Longer chapters are harder to make ...

You should wow your readers by the death. Kill off the characters that will make the readers surprised. This will make the book more interesting and when its over people ...

It's writien very well but i dont like the story line at all it's interesting and original but i just dont like it others may like it but it's not ...

Chapter 2 Two months Later…… A New Friend A New Enemy After months of training his new powers in the privacy of his own room Jack had almost reach his ...

Prophecy of Elwen Prologue In the year of 2007 a young boy by the name of Jack Everest came upon an amazing discovery that changed his life forever. I’m here ...

I llike the plot it sounds very interesting. I think the writing needs some work. Of course i'm a novice so my opinion might not mean much

It was very well-written and your pretty good. My problem isn't the writing its what its about. I dont like the Pony theme but really thats all. i'll give it ...

I have some questions 1. Will my novel be protected so it cannot be stolen I am putting alot of time and effort into this i dont want somebody to ...