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Once again i am late to the critquing perfect it's really good i enjoyied it thou it be short i didn't expect any less form a speaker of the forums!

Wow i really love this pecie of writing i thout from the name *Yu-Gi-Oh!!!! lol but yes i do like your writing No critque from what i've seen everyone else ...

Wow i really had no clue i thout i was still a newbie that no one would care if i left or not btw i am posting this after i ...

Well i dont want attention thats for sure...i dont strive for attention. Plus for those who think this si there fault your wrong it's my fault completly i'm a jerk ...

No it has nothing to do with critiques i apprecheat all of those and it made me a better writer I Thank Everyone For That But writing and chatting are ...

Hey everyone looks like i'm leaving YWS i can't fit in here just like everywhere else for those who enjoyed my chapter 1 of my book email me at i'll ...

There are alot of problems with this...i mean a lot since your 12 (acording to your profile) i don't expect to much since your grammer skills are probably 4th or ...

You no thats so true i have some emo friends there really just peolpe who react to things on a more emotional level anyone who makes fun of them are ...

Book 1: Fabled Chapter 1: Intro An explosion outside the castle window awoke the young prince. He sat up straight in his bed astonished by the events occurring outside. Another ...

Meet us at my place in about a hour” said Lyra. So the group parted Mike limped of with Rukia to his locker and Dante and Lyra headed of to ...

I thout it was pretty good i can't really give any advice since i'ma novice to so!

Nice i love it can't wait to read some more by you!

This is only for my post just for YWS Sota Techi Age: 15 Hair Color: Blonde Eye Color: Blue Personality: A soft hearted kid that is very smart, and handsome ...

Just like 1 paragraph of chapter one Chapter 1 The Coming Sota was sitting on his bed studying. The final exams were coming up and he need to get the ...

Prophecy of Elwen Prologue Sota walked through the front door. His mother sat on the couch reading a book. He sat his backpack on the chair next to the door. ...