Derek

I liked it. I wasn't bored, so that's a plus. The only part I really didn't like was when she thought that the boys only liked her for her body ...

Lol Yea i mean i haven't read all of your story Its jut really good lol i didn't know how else to say it :D Just take it as a ...

Chocoholic I'm going to have to disagree with you It was a short story so it wont be a book or anything It was just to show of his writing ...

I'm pretty sure this was just a short story he wrote for fun and to test some of his writing skills its not gonna be a full blown seris or ...

Yes this is a small portion of the book I hate it when people tell me they wanna know more about my characters I mean its only the first chapter? ...

Well i'm back :D And forever this time No more banning for me! So here is what i worked on while i was gone I redesigned the pre-chapter which was ...

I'm probably repeating stuff but a who care ;) Oh god, why dose my head feel like it was beaten in with a bat? I thought as I opened my ...

Hey this is my new story idea Critque it but also tell me if you like the storyline i'd appprechate it Thanks XD [pre]Symosis Prologue Energy…..everything in the world is ...

Wow this looks really cool sorry i am late i think i'll pop in **** Username: Derek_Fantasy Sibs: None Mini-animal: Small version of Roaric a black dragon Sucked in from: ...

A link to the thread: 1.Magitech: Tales of Vlora 2.Fantasy 3.Internet Explorer Ya i am a idiot i didn't save it to my computer XD =( I made myself sad ...

Just wanted everyone to know the first 3 chapters will be titled 1: Vlora 2: Shields 3: Zeroun thease are the main characters and its kind of an intro to ...

(my keyboard is still tight so i might have some typo's...get over it XD) Is it easier to write out a full decription of a character Method A:Like when you ...

[pre]Magitech Tales of Vlora Chapter 1 Vlora Vlora raced down the large chrome corridor, avoiding crowds of civilians, knocking them over as she passed. Bullets zooming past her body hit ...

She is not a genatic super soldier she use's Magitech which is technoly that has advance so far that a form a magic was created i will explain it in ...

Squallz hit upon the FFXIII trailer note... its like... word for word to action of the trailer. Most people cannot jump and spin in the air, let alone upside-down. That ...