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Re: Poem That Got Me a Date to Homecoming
Will you marry me?
Sep 30, 2010 -
Re: Suicide
Oh my god! !!!! Wow wow wow. Ok, so this was amazing. I don't get everyone else's problems.. I mean have they READ this genius? You are a really good ...
Sep 30, 2010 -
Re: A Game
Hey :) I like how your lines flow.. It's soothing. But it just seems like something everyones writing about,don't get me wrong, I like it... But it could be a ...
Sep 30, 2010 -
Re: Bluebird
I am in awe of you. Of this. In can't even imagine how you wrote this.. It's that wonderful.
Sep 30, 2010 -
Re: Aetdrug.
Oooooohhhh!!! I love it I love it!! Wow. I wanna try aetdrug :D This was amazing and I thought that your use of awesome twice was fine.. Not annoying. I ...
Sep 30, 2010 -
Re: I guess it was the weeds fault
This is straight from my diary, so sorry if it seems a little weirdly written. I was also kinda recovering from a high 12:33 Tuesday 16th There are no stars ...
Sep 27, 2010 -
Re: Only Then Did I Come to You
I love this :D The title was what made me click on it and i'm glad I did. Im going to print it out and read it again and again. ...
Sep 26, 2010 -
Re: Not you
This poem is like a sigh. It's full of longing and beauty and I love it. I love this sooo much, everything about it. God, that was lovely
Sep 25, 2010 -
Re: Taboo [11]
This was amazinggggggg! When I finished reading it I felt like i had to come up for air :D It actually caused me pain.. I felt her pain. The beginning ...
Sep 25, 2010 -
Re: How to Shoot an Albatross
WOW :D very interesting
Sep 25, 2010 -
Re: The Essence of Time
I like the idea, but it dosent seem too out of the ordinary The thing that stands out is the repetition.. And that's what saves the poem It got me ...
Sep 25, 2010 -
Re: Anne, for James
Do you remember When my father He called me From green drenched sunshine Into a drunken kaleidoscope of amber And he cut off my hair James, it fell off like ...
Sep 25, 2010 -
Re: The Ballad of the Rain
I loved this. Even though.. I will admit it.. I have no idea what's going on in the poem :P Somehow it works and somehow it becomes magical. Very very ...
Sep 25, 2010 -
Re: Cañónoscuridad part I (edited)
I thought that this was pretty good :D really weirdly.. The slang works sometimes and NOT others. Your descriptions are amazing, I wanted them to go on longer :D I ...
Sep 25, 2010 -
Re: The Wisdom of Mr Fox
I love this. It's so real.. But absolutely not.. And the ending where the fox speaks is genius :D I love your wording and the ENDINGGG again .. Fantastic.
Sep 25, 2010
